ARTICLES THAT MEMBERS WOULD LIKE PRIVATE FEEDBACK ON

Some members prefer private feedback and are too nervous to put their links here. By all means put the link here, although no criticism of links on this thread please. Respect the wishes of those who prefer private feedback and help them if you feel you can, by private message.

I don't mind any feedback at all about what i've got on the site! If anyone feels compelled to do so. Some of it is not perfect as I am trying to stretch my writing muscles in a variety of topics, but you wanna say anything about it I don't mind!!!

http://www.helium.com/user/show/27650

Any and All Feedback is Welcome and Appreciated...Thanks.
I have a few articles that I am real proud of and of course, some that, apparently somewhere along the line, my brain went limp..lol.


http://www.helium.com/user/show/26631

Safirespider wrote:

, apparently somewhere along the line, my brain went limp..lol.

what a great expression, I think I often suffer from "thinking with a limp" as well.

LOL. Steerpyke...I guess it's a lot like walking with a lisp..

This is one of the one's I wrote today. It has slowly been going up in the rankings all day however it is still hovering around #26. Does it need help or do I just need to be patient and leave it be?
http://www.helium.com/tm/160590

Well it climbed one more notch today so far. Maybe I'll wait and see unless any of you have a critique for me on it.

Feedback. Think you could have added more. Plus you used your instead of you're

Think it needs something more original.

Ok I did a leapfrog on it and tried to add more and make it more original. Hopefully it's better now. I added a couple more idea's. And changed the way it was written a little so the idea's don't run together and create confusion.
Thank you for you input I really appreciate it.